Author Topic: Let's Play "Write That Poem"  (Read 80685 times)

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It came by surprise, it hit me hard, I was sick, couldn't sleep, couldn't breath, couldn't eat.  My steps kept getting heavier and I felt like I could go on no more.  Then one day when I thought I would just explode, afte much pain after hours  I held my beautiful child in my arms and I knew then this was the best thing in my life so four years later I did it again, so the best things in my life are my children.

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Nice job Musikgirl... I like it a lot. :)

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Next Topic: Your First Love & Your Last

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Next Topic: Your First Love & Your Last

Tough topic... I'll give it a try...

There's a big difference between the two
I loved both very much through and through
But there came a time when I had to try
To let go and let that first love die

Because a plane with no engine will not fly
No matter how hard you try to keep it in the sky
Its better to bail, to live, and love another day
And self medicate yourself in your own little way

Then goin' down in the flames with that plane
No matter who's to blame is near insane
Because love and lust can be confused
Love is when two hearts are fused

Together forever unconditionally
I've found the last lover I'll ever need
She holds my heart and the key
She's the one now known as PSC.

 :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love:

NEW TOPIC: The Colorful Autumn Trees

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Next Topic: Your First Love & Your Last

Tough topic... I'll give it a try...

There's a big difference between the two
I loved both very much through and through
But there came a time when I had to try
To let go and the that first love die

Because a plane with no engine will not fly
No matter how hard you try to keep it in the sky
Its better to bail, to live, and love another day
And self medicate yourself in your own little way

Then goin' down in the flames with that plane
Not matter who's to blame is near insane
Because love and lust can be confused
Love is when two hearts are fused

Together forever unconditionally
I've found the last lover I'll ever need
She holds my heart and the key
She's the one now known as PSC.

 :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love:

NEW TOPIC: The Colorful Autumn Trees
:smitten: :smitten: :smitten: :smitten: :smitten: :smitten: :smitten: :smitten: :smitten: :smitten: :love: :love: :love:awwwwwwwww

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Next Topic: Your First Love & Your Last

Tough topic... I'll give it a try...

There's a big difference between the two
I loved both very much through and through
But there came a time when I had to try
To let go and the that first love die

Because a plane with no engine will not fly
No matter how hard you try to keep it in the sky
Its better to bail, to live, and love another day
And self medicate yourself in your own little way

Then goin' down in the flames with that plane
Not matter who's to blame is near insane
Because love and lust can be confused
Love is when two hearts are fused

Together forever unconditionally
I've found the last lover I'll ever need
She holds my heart and the key
She's the one now known as PSC.

 :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love:

NEW TOPIC: The Colorful Autumn Trees
:smitten: :smitten: :smitten: :smitten: :smitten: :smitten: :smitten: :smitten: :smitten: :smitten: :love: :love: :love:awwwwwwwww

That is sweet

You lucky chick you ;D :yes:

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Next Topic: Your First Love & Your Last

Tough topic... I'll give it a try...

There's a big difference between the two
I loved both very much through and through
But there came a time when I had to try
To let go and the that first love die

Because a plane with no engine will not fly
No matter how hard you try to keep it in the sky
Its better to bail, to live, and love another day
And self medicate yourself in your own little way

Then goin' down in the flames with that plane
Not matter who's to blame is near insane
Because love and lust can be confused
Love is when two hearts are fused

Together forever unconditionally
I've found the last lover I'll ever need
She holds my heart and the key
She's the one now known as PSC.

 :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love:

NEW TOPIC: The Colorful Autumn Trees
:smitten: :smitten: :smitten: :smitten: :smitten: :smitten: :smitten: :smitten: :smitten: :smitten: :love: :love: :love:awwwwwwwww

That is sweet

You lucky chick you ;D :yes:
thats what i think everyday i wake up  :yes: :love:

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Ok now lets quit this mush I am going to puke :rofl: :rofl:

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Ok now lets quit this mush I am going to puke :rofl: :rofl:
lol sorry
got to the pub and tell mojo to give ya shot for free! put it on my account :rofl:

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Ok now lets quit this mush I am going to puke :rofl: :rofl:
lol sorry
got to the pub and tell mojo to give ya shot for free! put it on my account :rofl:

ok :rofl:

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Game ON!

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Crisp cool air going thorugh my hair
I drive with all of my windows down
In my face I feel the sweet rushing air
And the trees are dressed in beautiful gowns

As the wind goes by the trees
They do seem like they are dancing
Yellow, red, green and brown trees
Autum is the time for romancing

Next topic: Pets ;D

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Pets


Unconditional love is what I got from you
All good things end unfortunately its true
But 14 years of smiles you gave me
When I was only 9 you saved me
When I had no other friend around
And the telephone never made a sound
You were always there you cared
A billion secrets I must've shared
With you and its true that I always knew
It would always stay between me and you
You were by my side and you would listen
In you I'd confide your brown eyes would glisten
Until the end you gave me every bit of love
Your heart could give then you went above


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Next topic: Something Celestial (planets, stars, the moon etc..)

the stars are out
last nights crying
the tears of acid falling falling
do you think that theres life on mars
planet friends a far a far
can you dream out past the moon
or is that too far
tuck away the clouds
and sing a lullaby to the stars
a sleep tonight goodmorning sun

next topic: a best friend

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next topic: a best friend

Someone else can do this topic too... cuz I kinda wrote about my best friend ever in my last poem about "pets". He was my dog Sparky. Now I'm writing about another friend I've had for a long time. The moon.


Always there for me nite after nite
Unless its cloudy your face is bright
Glowing illuminating everything below
The pedestal you sit upon grows
Across the sky as nite begins to pass
I've gazed at you from the tall Nebraska grass
I've danced with you and your reflection
Wrecked at nite in the Pacific Ocean
I tasted the mist decending like a fountain
From your lips standing a top a California mountain
Feeling the moon dust consume my very soul
I knew you'd always be there to fill any hole
Left in my heart until the day I'm bones in the ground
I know long after that day you will still be around.

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He has made me smile when I was cryin'
He is the one and only Mr. Mojo Risin :rofl:
meh, and I make her crying...then what am I???? ::)


You are the one that keeps me on my toes, looking at my Gilby and all ::) :rofl:

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Man it gets a lil' heated when Izzy is in the house.

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Man it gets a lil' heated when Izzy is in the house.

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Rain fingers caressing naked flesh,
Calling "come play with me amongst the smell of damp earth and the tangle of wet grass,"
Beseeching with the teasing drops that bring new life,
Quenching the thirst of the world.

I'm alive!
Standing on this balcony with arms outstretched,
Careless of those below,
Opening my mouth to taste life itself before the world can change it,
One with the renewal and the storm.

Recalling trusting birds feeding gently from my eager child hands,
The way a night so still spoke magic with electric promise,
Lying on a near dry river bed,
Making disonant music with 2 river stones clasped tight like treasure,
and a smile wide enough to embrace the whole sleeping universe,
I was alive!


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You are insanely good at this game! Thanks for posting that... I really liked it! You are one of the most talented people who post here. :yes:


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You are insanely good at this game! Thanks for posting that... I really liked it! You are one of the most talented people who post here. :yes:


When I first read that I was too kind of shy to post a thanks, or anything for that matter, but I'm back now with thanks in hand and wow.  That was a cool thing to say, and though you didn't know it, well timed also.
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I thought you might cover this one, but not yet, and so, I had a couple of minutes just before and thought I'd cheat and try to write on my own topic.  I didn't have a clue what I was going to do but here it is, and someone else feel free to cover that topic that isn't me if you want.

If shadows could speak little girl scarcely here,
Then do you think you could fall back to sleep?
They could be singing a lullabi echo,
And you'd need to tremble no more,
If shadows could speak they might say they were sorry,
For frightening this little girl so,
They might tell you that they just got lost in the darkness,
And hoped you might know their way home,
And they knew you've seen all kinds of shadows,
Shadows no one else can see,
And though you have pleaded they are not imagined,
Nobody wants to believe.

If shadows could speak would you lie here so stricken?
If they could explain they're the mirrors of light?
And where there was light there must once have been sunshine,
They are the echoes of day come to play,
If shadows could speak would they tell me the story,
Of one lonely child lying chilled in the dark,
Afraid to disturb so enduring 'til morning
When shadows and figments get lost in the day,
But I know that you still see those shadows,
Shadows no one else can see,
You say you know it's all just imagined,
And you fool everybody but me.








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WOW! :o
that is really really good you are truely talented im very happy to see your stuff on here :yes:

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WOW! :o
that is really really good you are truely talented im very happy to see your stuff on here :yes:


Thank you! It's a fun challenge to come up with stuff on the spot and see what you get.

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feigningthesun your are an awesome writer I really really enjoyed the last two that you posted. Give me something to espire too...if only I could get inside your head

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feigningthesun your are an awesome writer I really really enjoyed the last two that you posted. Give me something to inspire too...if only I could get inside your head

*hands Cattivo the special shrinking potion*
Now just crawl in through my ear, but remember, you only have 30 minutes in which to travel my inner skull, after which point if you have not exitted, either you will be crushed as you expand, or my head will explode, or both.
Oh, and thanks for the compliment.

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It's a fun challenge to come up with stuff on the spot and see what you get.

Yeah that's the ticket... Cattivo is one cool mofo to create a game like this...

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