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And the award goooooes toooooo : WAVE ROCK !!!!!!!!!!!!!

Honestly, this is mind blowing...I love it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Ok, again, another few of mine, who will never be as good as Waves, but here they are :
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Always hated the feeling of being watched
Singularity of a love never declared
Flame burning, love without fault
But intrusion has started a fear

Respect privacy and respect me
Grow in your anguish as Iím there
Respect privacy and respect me
Or my war Iíll declare

I donít feel hate towards all that
But canít you see you do wrong?
Even spying on me just a tat
Wonít make me write a love song

Try to imagine who I am and what I like
Donít spy to be sure youíre in control
I donít want us to end up in a fight
Just so Iíll know I was master of the ball

Donít try and say no, I see your soul
I see you and feel you, I know youíre all
Donít try and say yes, I know your ego
I feel the fear that makes you so shallow
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Little sis, little baby girl
Sweet saviour, life in a twirl
Little sis, little wild one
Sweet saviour, you were the one

I was going down hellís long road
Destructive and passive towards life
You, unlike others, werenít a fraud
And ordered me, taught me how to fight.

Little sis, I remember you wild
Sweet saviour, little blond one
Little sis, you were my light
Sweet saviour, light now gone.

From laughter to fabulous secrets,
You had the magic, reinvented life
From taking problems into silly bets
Constructing what was my life.

Little sis, you were called Audrey
Sweet saviour, beautiful soul
Little sis, I remember you Audrey
Sweet, I never was your saviour.

Guilt, feeling of betrayal,
I carry it day and night
Fearing one day your funeral
You didnít know  how to fight.

Little sis, why did you help others?
Why didnít you save yourself?
Little sis, ran away from your fears
Sweet saviour, I canít forgive myself.

Little sis, you were like my own
Audrey, I wanted to be your saviour
You were like my little sis, my own
Audrey, I think of you every hour.
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Sun lightened that square office room
Joyful chatter narrowed my mind to your smile
Rain had stopped, so had dark gloom
And my heart had just ran a long mile

I thought I had found what I always wanted
I now realise I gained much more
I thought I had stumbled upon what was blessed
My every living second is now filled sour

I am part of your life and your whole
Just one of your lives, just one of your lies
I am not one of those joyful whores
I am just your centre, just like a wife

I used to wonder where you were and what,
What you did and what she was like
There have been so many sheís that,
My heart is weak, fragile, itís an attack

I shouldnít care, I should be proud
I should feel youíre mine no matter what
I could be happy if I was proud
You divide too much, the problem's just that

I am part of your life and your whole
Just one of your lives, just one of your lies
I am not one of those joyful whores
I am just your centre, just like a wife

I am part of your life, and a whole
Just one life, mine, stops with your lies.
Iíll never be  like your joyful whores
Maybe your centre, never your wife.

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Sights of torture whereas i think nurture
Got a kick from cruelty, you, my enemy
Profane creature lacking heart beating
Perverted mind, sickening happening

Girl writing, keeper of a human zoo
Sick mind, know whoís talking to you
Animal defender from an early age
Cats in bottles give you an edge?

Please let the world read this pledge
Donít let him earn his atrocious wage
Amorous me looking at my cat
If they donít stop Iíll get a BAT  !!!
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Softness surrounded by jelly fields
Dreams only there to be fulfilled
Nights so absolute and perfect
Pillow to my head, only love to detect

Walking with an amorous step
Waking in an adventurous bed
Dreaming a sensuous life led
Never thinking of a heart bled

Peeping through various visions
Of me always with a tender lion
The roar I hear and the claws I feel
I know weíll find the path we will

Spiritual guide upon my lonely soul
Shadow helping me to reach my goal
Never there yet since birth always present
My heart each day goes into hideous lament

Do all girls dreams of a white knight in armour?
Do they grow up hoping to find some more?
Can they just encounter their prince loyal?
Or do they just fantasize out of cheer dismal?

Future from here seems like a tiny bubble
Waiting to burst before it hits the cradle
My tomorrow waits, so I will never moan
I know I have to go and make it on my own

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Past lives regressed to despairing
Queen in exile needing her king
Cries in the dark as time elapses
Past lives, jigs, just past dances

Past me enslaving in Africa
Trying to reach the white nirvana?
Past time smoking in Chicago
Killing cops for the big capo (ne)?

Past youths blackened, oh death
Only blood, only awful mischief
Redemption on a soul twice twisted
Can one do it being iron fisted?

Light has shone yet often dark
Iím told the clocks now turn back
Soften my melancholy dear life
For goodness Iíll give my every strife

Let power and glory remain past
Memories of pain shall be last
Every future will bring the light
This is now for that I fight

Past lives regressed for learning
I am now woman liking her kin
Laughs today as time elapses
Future life, Iíll get many chances.


Offline Rock Is Dead

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I really think more people need to read it. Its very very captivating to me anyway.


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thought i was just weird and this is another branch of my weirdness.



Instead of weird.. you could just be artistic... innovative... and/or dare I say it CREATIVE!! :)

and to the lovely and talented Jessica!

You latest posts contains some beautiful writing the following stood out at me.

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Spiritual guide upon my lonely soul
Shadow helping me to reach my goal
Never there yet since birth always present
My heart each day goes into hideous lament

Do all girls dreams of a white knight in armour?
Do they grow up hoping to find some more?
Can they just encounter their prince loyal?
Or do they just fantasize out of cheer dismal?

Future from here seems like a tiny bubble
Waiting to burst before it hits the cradle
My tomorrow waits, so I will never moan
I know I have to go and make it on my own

That's just good quality stuff... I like your writing style its full of things that make me think. I mean really think. I think you are quite intellectual and very good with a pen!! ;)

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The Queen Of Doors...... the words are just a metaphor
The poem tells a visual story....
but in reality...
the poem is about being caught in a love triangle and saying basically that you would rather die than choose between what/whom you love.
Because you love them all too much to choose, you need them all.
And you can't live without any of them.
And so.... The Queen chooses death rather than have to choose between all that she loves.

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That's totally the vibe I was getting from that one... But I must admit its much clearer now that you broke it down for me.


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The Queen chooses death rather than have to choose between all that she loves.


Thats so beautiful. That's why I think everyone should have chance to read this... you may call it weird or whatever you want - I call it brilliant!

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That's just good quality stuff... I like your writing style its full of things that make me think. I mean really think. I think you are quite intellectual and very good with a pen!! ;)

 :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: yeah, intellectual might be the word !

Tortured with a thousand questions ? if that fits, then, i am intellectual..LOL..
I'd rather write instead of bothering everyone with my questions.
And some poems i'll keep if you don't mind, because they are 3 steps further into weirdness and too mystique and private to be interesting to anyone...LOL...intellectually mystique.... :rofl: :beer:

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Well....I'm weird and I can't find any of my stuff - so here's the worst poem ever =) I'm not actually crazy, by the way... :D

Walking a line of insanity
What side of the fence are you on?
I need my pills, have you seen my water?
Dividing highways lead to mistakes
The clock ticks faster,
but only when I watch the kettle.
I'm not having fun,
the time is flying by.
Did you eat my fucking pills?
FUCK hypochondriacs!
You can never trust them,
but you can't trust lawn gnomes either.
Sister Harry said I'm just dreaming,
I've never been to sleep before.
Fucking hypochondriacs stole my drugs


Right......anyways  :)

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whoa..... velvet revolution.... that grooves....
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i can dig on that hypochondriac stuff!!!

my b/f is like that!!

drives me fucking CRAZY!

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whoa..... velvet revolution.... that grooves....
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i can dig on that hypocondriac stuff!!!

my b/f is like that!!

drives me fucking CRAZY!


Haha...thanks! It took me about 5 minutes to write it.....lol...lawn gnomes haunt my dreams!!!   :nervous:

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This is the best thread on the whole site.
Here is one dedicated to Velvet Reovlver

Thank God for you presence
you stimulate each sense
sight, touch and taste
I turn you on with haste
You unite each race and creed
but you cant see the deed
Every note rythm and rhyme
like a fine wine
only gets better with time
Forever growing
Forever alive
The Great Communicator
The Infernal Liberator
            -To Velvet Reovler

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Let me tell you
about my dreams at night, at first
They're almost like an euphoric high
then they turn for the worst
and i wake myself with a cry


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All of these writings are fantastic!! Very awakening and truly captivating!! Everyone of you have a pricelss talent!! :cool:


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awww come on you guys  ::)... anyway
yet another one

Why are  you such a whore?
sell your self for no money at all
your in for a fall
Why are you such a bore?
I see the future of two
a small dependant stranger in you
You are going to hit the floor
You wont know why came
or what you're here for
Just play the game
Its all the same  


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awww come on you guys  ::)... anyway
yet another one

Why are  you such a whore?
sell your self for no money at all
your in for a fall
Why are you such a bore?
I see the future of two
a small dependant stranger in you
You are going to hit the floor
You wont know why came
or what you're here for
Just play the game
Its all the same  





hmm..... kinda sounds like the makings for a punk rock song on this one...

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Maybe But i havent really tried writting songs before. I mean I wrote a couple but they werent very good.

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This is all very awesome stuff everyone (Mr. Mojo, Jessica ,Wave, Velvet Revolution) on this thread deserves a medal  :yes:

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Thanks for the compliment but your stuff isn't exactly chopped liver you have some of the most interesting pieces to read. Thanks for sharing with me.

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I fit the lable
I am the key
My mind isnt stable
My emotions arent free
End the misery
I think im sick
Free from tyranny
You make me sick
I think its a disease
Ups and downs
always aim to please
plasterd smiles and upside down frowns
Im gonna get ran over
feedin trees
pushin up clovers
Under mind control
found myself
under control
chain the self
change the self
meed the self
makeup the self
free the self
feed the self
be the self
just be the self
 


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I usually write poems. I use it more as an outlet. Most of the time I write depressing poems...but sometimes I write positive ones too.

This was written for someone special.
"And I see you from the distance
Knowing you can't hold me in your arms now
Why can't I love you like I really do?
Why can't I show you how much you mean to me?
Don't mean to hurt you baby
Don't mean to hurt myself
This pain inside me is desperately looking for a way out.

Tell me you love me baby
Tell me that you mean it
Tell me that you show the world your love to me.
Tell me so I can feel your love
Bleed for me..like I bleed for you.
End of the world I would fly for you
End of the days I would want to spend my life with you.
You are what makes beauty
You are my sun..my guiding light.
You are perfection for the gods envy you.

Love me like you do.
For the stars will fall from the sky
When our bodies will be intervined
Our hearts meeting each other
Never letting go. Never escaping a breath.
Hold me close for the distance is such a hard thing
Hold me close for loving you is such a special gift"


This was during my dark times...
"I feel lonely..I feel sick
Feed me in this lonely box.
Feed me to my death
For I never see what people are really about.
For I'm stepped on every chance they take.
Feed me a bottle of wine.

Feed me so I would feel better.
Don't stop.
Don't let this be real
Don't let my emotions surface.
Friends...something that I know that doesn't exist.
Step on me again, I'll probably not notice.
Not that I matter.
Not that friendships matter.
I wish you were dead.
I would be better off if you were dead."

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That peom was like every relationship I have ever been in
Do we know each other? :eek: