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Offline Rock Is Dead

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I like your work Cattivo... I don't know that I have anything to suggest as far as progressing as a writer other than refuse to have boundaries or limitations, and always write with your emotion. One of my favorite active songwriters Rivers Cuomo has been quoted as saying:

"...you must be intoxicated in some way to create anything... my favorite kind of intoxication is emotional intoxication."

I really like that because self expression is all about who we are, the emotions we feel and how those emotions and feelings affect us day to day. I really like your writing I can tell you put emotion into and that's what its all about...  ;)

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Keep posting as you feel inspired to... I like  your stuff Cattivo you too can write some quality poetry. :smoking:

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Umm Ok Here is some I wrote today

Whats your motivation
is it creation
of life and sacrifice
is it everlasting
or in time to be ceasing
Maybe its dying
an end to trying

I dream of being in your arms
To swim in your depth
Your always a pleasant blue
To swim in your depth
would be a dream come true
Always in perpetual motion
Frozen climax of perfection

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Umm Ok Here is some I wrote today

Whats your motivation
is it creation
of life and sacrifice
is it everlasting
or in time to be ceasing
Maybe its dying
an end to trying

I dream of being in your arms
To swim in your depth
Your always a pleasant blue
To swim in your depth
would be a dream come true
Always in perpetual motion
Frozen climax of perfection

 :'(

Right through me that one...right through me..

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Umm Ok Here is some I wrote today

Whats your motivation
is it creation
of life and sacrifice
is it everlasting
or in time to be ceasing
Maybe its dying
an end to trying

I dream of being in your arms
To swim in your depth
Your always a pleasant blue
To swim in your depth
would be a dream come true
Always in perpetual motion
Frozen climax of perfection

Wow...

Offline Rock Is Dead

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Finally one by Wave! Thanks for posting that I like it very much. I hope you'll post more because this one was really good. I'm diggin it! :) Many times poetry lacks this kind of straight forward honesty... good job babe you are talented let me tell you. Everything I've read here is quality. ;)

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Let your life be in the sunshine
Not the darkness of your sorrow
You may see your all today
When you know it’ll come tomorrow

From A rose is still a rose: Aretha Franklin

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Wow Wave really dark...I like it

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Damn good Wave I bow before you

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Wave you are totally blowing me away with these.  :yes:

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Again, a few more from me, older ones this time :

Daily routine feeds my brain
Daily grieving feeds my heart
All he needs is a housewife
To take care of his shitty life

Can’t you feel the pain?
Can’t you hear sorrow?
Can’t you see tears again?
That hurts like an arrow

Walking on some desert path
Waking in our empty bed
You made me feel your wrath
I am locked in some fucking shade

Long gone are the happy promises
So far the memories of truth
Bliss had now kept its distance
Bitterness had stole my youth

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For a friend who's now in the skies

Too far away

I know you felt helpless
You wanted to come fast
And relieve my awful stress
the curtain closed on final act

you’re miles away from me
now and forever out of my way
I know, you’d reach out to me
But you’re just too, too far away

World so little, so  small and
yet so big and distant right now
don’t cry, brother, my friend
distance is not the problem right now

you’re miles away from me
now and forever out of my way
I know, you’d reach out to me
But you’re just too, too far away

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Long ago, a time begun for a family
Long ago, we were destined for loyalty
Long ago, we shared the utmost love
And now is time phoenix  rose above

We're the hope and the good
Nasty has tried nasty has failed
We're bearers of true happiness
Now is time for pureness to unveil

I am not here to pray the gods
I am not here to stop fate or destiny
I was brought to help to make up for lost
And bring them towards infinity

Let's not be embodied in some dark life
Let's cross that water and swim again
Only the love can show you the white path
So to grow and bring along these men

You are as strong as he was
You are as good as he wanted
You are as intelligent as needed
You are as love as the they are hatred

We'll  fight together in the midst of eternity
We are meant to do it all again
We will give the world bearers of the flame
So our hope they can always carry…


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Jessica is so very smart...
now THAT blows me away!
I love how her mind works.

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by the way.... to those of you who commented to me... thank you all very much.... (I hadn't seen all of your posts until now, i was looking through some stuff)

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Thanks for posting those Jessica... you know how i love your work!!!

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Thanks for posting those Jessica... you know how i love your work!!!


great job Mojo!
brilliant!
i love it!
 :-*

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I love both your works !!!!

MOJO, you are very touching..Very...

And Wave, kudos you know ?

I think both of you are full of surprises... :yes:

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BTW : thanks to both of you. :beer:

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great job Mojo!
brilliant!
i love it!

Thanks Wave you are such an inspiration sometimes. Granted I wrote that one months ago and had all but forgotten it. Then your poems stirred my emotions so much it brought back what I was feeling when I wrote Anvil In The Sky. I remembered it because of your work... so I present it to you as a gift. A piece of my soul that I think you can identify with on a personal level... since I consider your work truly a gift to me since I'm able to feel what you feel through your words. Wave you have the gift of language.

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The Dreamer poem is a delight!!! And the portion I quoted is simply to die for! I really dig this one A LOT!!! Maybe the best out of all the Wave poems in this thread... you are STILL kickin' my ass with these Wave... you rock my world sometimes!!! :headbanger:

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this is the first time that i have ever posted some of what i condsider my "real" writing online.

In that case we are truly very lucky... you should share these with more people than just us... you really should.

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And Wave, kudos you know ?

I think both of you are full of surprises... :yes:


yeah.... and you thought that i only write silly stuff about Duff McKagan, huh

 :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:

just a joke....

but really....

that's all i have ever posted online before... stuff about rock stars... because i don;t consider that my real writing... and so i don't mind sharing it.....

this is the first time that i have ever posted some of what i condsider my "real" writing online.

I never thought you only wrote about rockstars.

But i do prefer it when you open your soul like that.
You have a gift and it's beautiful you can share it with us.

I hope you'll show us some more because your writings don't deserve to be kept in the dark.. :-*

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You have a gift and it's beautiful you can share it with us.

I hope you'll show us some more because your writings don't deserve to be kept in the dark..

I'd like to second that, only I have to direct it towards every single one of you who has had the courage to post something of theirs in this thread. You all are truly making my nite maybe even my week by being so open tonite.

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I never thought you only wrote about rockstars.

But i do prefer it when you open your soul like that.
You have a gift and it's beautiful you can share it with us.

I hope you'll show us some more because your writings don't deserve to be kept in the dark.. :-*


i know.... i know....
i am just saying that that is the only stuff i have ever posted online before...
things i wrote about duff.... blah blah blah....
i tend to hide my real self....

eh, but what the hell.... you all make me feel comfortable enough to share.

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I never thought you only wrote about rockstars.

But i do prefer it when you open your soul like that.
You have a gift and it's beautiful you can share it with us.

I hope you'll show us some more because your writings don't deserve to be kept in the dark.. :-*


i know.... i know....
i am just saying that that is the only stuff i have ever posted online before...
things i wrote about duff.... blah blah blah....
i tend to hide my real self....

eh, but what the hell.... you all make me feel comfortable enough to share.

Yeah, what the hell, just come and have a drink .... :wave: :beer:

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Wave now that one was definately the best yet!!!  :love:I LOVE IT! I have to admit I was swept away with the way you wrote that! Full of images expoding in my mind... you are awesome to be able to write such an epic and make everything fit together so perfectly. I think this one should be read by EVERYONE... I'm going to show it to a bunch of people I know if you don't mind. Hell I'd like to print off a copy to save if you wouldn't object!?!