Author Topic: Let's Play "Write That Poem"  (Read 53932 times)

Offline Ines_rocks

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I'm reviving this cuz it looks fun, i'll start with a poem about lip rings...

It's hanging there like a severed tooth
Somehow gruesome welded to the lip
I met her in a telephone booth
While I was on an acid trip
She had a metal lip piercing
In bed she was a fierce thing
She told me that her name was Mary
Turns out it was really John, a fairy
I'll never be the same again
The lip ring's curse, the curse of men.

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Tinkerbell? lol Can you give as an easier one please?  :lol:
great poem btw :)

Offline born2boogie

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Dripping from your thighs
A sexual tension with no reply 
I can hear you cry
I can hear you cry with no reply
Come and set me alight

Come home
Come home
To the place we know
The world that makes us whole
But you hold no hope
With this there is a no reply
No reply
He’s not home
He’s not coming home
Never was
Never will be a reply
But still…

Dripping from his thighs
A sexual tension with no reply 
I can hear you cry

I can hear you cry,
My mind crys for you
I'll cry for you
I'll weep for you


just came out...  :smoking: fuck it I don't wanna know anymore where it comes from, just know I love it  :smitten:

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Swirling Lights

 

The lights they carry me unto a space

Perhaps into another place

The drum and bass it does surround

The music in my head so does pound

 

True friends are there without your call

A brother is there before you fall

My heart did bleed and then it drained

My guitar soars and screams in pain

 

I love the music it soothes my soul

It warms me in winter like a shoal

The lights my sunlight, the smoke my air

I swerve my spaceship without a care

 

If I were to die before I wake

I pray to Hendrix my soul to take

I've played Rock and Roll, and the Blues

I've floated high in silver shoes

 

I opened the walls, and closed the floor

and even tried to go through the door

Up the down staircase I have been

but then again don't remember when

 

The lights they soothe me,and the tunez

The DJ plays the record swoons

My blood was blue but now it's red

A flock of seagulls around my head.

Peace

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Cazzy
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Offline maxxoccupancy

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The Gods of Rock are dead
The words you know I said
The fuck word will suffice
We write and throw the dice
Playing to the overfed

Masses drink to get fucked
Fakes sing to get sucked
Boys who sing the lies
Girls who fake the sighs
This world of mine is plucked

I'm waiting for the causage
Of a world that dines on sausage
Fags trapped in the closage
And women confined to bondage

I want a another world
Where man has no price
Where children look up to dad
That the principles suffice

Give me truth
Give me truth
There's nothing uglier than the lies
The swallows and smiles
Walk of shame
Show every tooth

I don't know the boys of rock
When the wind blows, they are the sock
Money for words
When the offer was heard
Didn't you take the cock

Give me something
Something for real
Give me one thing
Of this plastic deal

Father's words are for sale
Liposuction the whale
Who sleeps beside
Who follows the tide
The ebb and flow of mail

Gimme the truth!
I ask it of you!
You present a row of practiced smiles
You make for me a bed of lies
To lie down next to you

Give me the truth
Nation of youth
Vodka slips behind vermouth
With a rebel yell
The kids can't they tell
The lies that you sell



Offline born2boogie

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not done any poetry for ages.. did this one the other week.. with a really good tune going on in my head..

Just Words


I know I sould be doing something
but sat here doing nothing
nothing.. but thinking about you..
my heart is still lost in space
when I know I should just give it away
maybe one day I'll give it to you..

coz friends can turn into lovers
lovers into friends
baby with you beside me
we can concer this world with no end
but still sat here doing nothing
nothing.. but thinking about you..


maybe I should call you in the middle of the night
tell you baby I can't sleep tonight
and baby would you like to come on over
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maybe tell you all the feelings I have for you
and hope that you feel the same way too
but still sat here.....

doing nothing
nothing.. but thinking about...... yoooooooooooou..

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Cakes of fight
Steaks of knives
Cut into me like... a never ending line of serrated life

It takes a right
To stage a fight
Butt into me like... a never ending pack of lies

Rare is the one that takes it like a man
Holding the sword and holding the hand
Breaching the ford and holding the plan

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R.I.P.K.C.

Cruising the fast lane headed west,
flooded by thousands sink or swim like the rest,
caught up in the turmoil runs deep through the night,
scratching the brain and I'm unwilling to fight,
I embrace the high, the lights and the status,
tight on my tail is my own homemade stratus,
I feel undertow as I climb to the top,
reality strikes at my bottom all along carved of rock,


Don't pray for me, cause it falls on deaf ears,
A path to the ground watch my bones disappear,
my frown wraps around the chambered mic as I sang,
"I hope all are fuckin happy!" as I exit with a bang!



 

Offline born2boogie

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aw poetry..   :lol:

Truth be told
I don't want to hold you close
Never really knew you.. or so I was told
And now we are though
I'm so glad just so you know
Truth be told..

Was so blind by your kind
Thought you was a love of mine
One of a kind, To blow the mind (into spacetime)
I was so blind but your love is of the mind
Not one of a kind

Truth be told
I don't want to hold you close
Never really knew you.. and so I was told
And now we are though
I'm so glad just so you know
Truth be told..

Back again to the love and hate
bullshit you was never worth the wait
bullshit you was never worth the wait
so good I have to say it again
Just so you know
Truth be told..

edit: bless I cant spell..
« Last Edit: December 28, 2010, 06:22:45 PM by born2boogie »

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Mould

They say..
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder
But if you seen the beholder
You would want to grow mould..

« Last Edit: April 05, 2012, 02:28:41 PM by born2boogie »

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not done any poetry for ages it seems..  :o

Feeling so cold
Nowhere to go
My heart has no home
Knocking at your door
My knuckles red raw
Only to find that no-ones home..

Was I uncool or just a fool
Or maybe I was just there for you to use
Tears don't run dry I just want to know why
How you could be so hurtful and cruel

The streets where I walk alone
Its always been my home
I guess its all I'll ever know
No tears don't run dry I just want to know why
How you could be so hurtful and cruel

My heart has no home
Like a stray dog I roam..

x---------------------------------------x

I won the battle of my life
But the war between my heart and head
Still rages on

x---------------------------------------x

Close our eyes we are side by side
Miles and space between us
You take my breath away with the words you say
My soul belongs to you my crimson lover
I just want to look at you for awhile
Smell and touch your skin to fall deep within
To press my lips softly upon your neck
Whisper in your ear, sends chills down your spine
To run away together and hide from world
My crimson lover say you'll be here soon
Until then I'll play my harp with broken strings..





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Voices down the telephone line
asking me if I'm feeling fine
I say hey baby don't you worry..

You still take away my cloudy days
Melt my heart in a millions ways
Kiss me like no other I just can't replace..

The secrets we share and the time together
Its the best I've ever known so lets make
It last forever you and me baby
We are one of a kind..

Voices down the telephone line
asking me if I'm feeling fine
I say hey baby don't you worry..

Do you remember the time we danced all night
sipped the wine until we was feeling
body mind and soul entwined
the feeling of you was so devine..

Voices down the telephone line
asking me if I'm feeling fine
I say hey baby don't you worry
pop a purple pill and fall asleep
count the orange sheep as I sleep
the feeling of you is so devine..


(hum why is it when I hear Scott Weiland songs I come out with bullshit?) *but its poetry all the same and the tune in my head for this one was good lol* I just cant stop myself I hate it  :(

EDIT: I know I come out with bullshit most of the time what I mean is love sick bullshit if ya know what I mean? :lol:
« Last Edit: April 25, 2012, 02:27:48 PM by born2boogie »

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EDIT: I know I come out with bullshit most of the time what I mean is love sick bullshit if ya know what I mean? :lol:

Always serves a purpose though. Legendary Irish singer Imelda May broke up with a boyfriend right before a gig as a teenager, to which her father said "Is your heart broken? Good. Now you can sing the blues".

Turn a negative into a positive!

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I think my poetry days are over!  :( well until I come across someone who can light my fire.. 
most if not all my poetry was about Mr Weiland and now I have no passion for him anymore..
so who can I wright about now? oh well  :lol:

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The Fairy and Leprechaun

If you down into the woods tonight
you mite see the fairy that sold me
rotten eggs and a broken watch
I was destining to lose this fight
I know this coz the leprechaun sold
me fools gold that I paid the fairy with
so the battle of fairy and leprechaun
happened she was outraged of the tale
and hit the leprechaun with a big wet fish
then the leprechaun hit the fairy
with his fools gold until she saw the rainbow
days passed then the years flew by
I sat here on my toadstool eating my rotten eggs
and watching the time by my broken watch
hoping it would all end then from the corner
of my eye a twinkle of light caught my eye
it was a bunny so beautiful that I had to follow

heehee I still keep writing shit that no-one reads  :lol:

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EDIT: I know I come out with bullshit most of the time what I mean is love sick bullshit if ya know what I mean? :lol:

Always serves a purpose though. Legendary Irish singer Imelda May broke up with a boyfriend right before a gig as a teenager, to which her father said "Is your heart broken? Good. Now you can sing the blues".

Turn a negative into a positive!
CT I didnt see this post.. I blind awww thanks my friend.. ^_^ x