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a day is at its end, another night about to begin
my arm around her shoulders hers at my waist
salt in the air i taste
on her lips and finger tips
as go along with the waves humming a song
it wont be long until the sun rises to reveal the dawn
But in this moment of pleasurable escape
with my moon light date.
I realize this is life
and its not to late

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Hows the warm sand
does it ease the frustrations
how does the sun look
does it shine on you and me
are you tired yet
weve been walking for a long while
but the only thing i can think of tonight
is you and me do you think that to be shallow
id kiss your lips if i thought we'd never be together again
walking along the sand
this shall never end
tonight forever and ever and then

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Nice one!
good topic to... we'll go with that one :yes:

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I hate to post one that I wrote a long time ago but it fits the topic.

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your own identity

The Lone Stranger

Dodgin' bullets, provin' their bigger
Proceeding to pull it, they hold down the trigger
They try to null it, the life of this figure
So they can say they stole it, but can't face the mirror.

I'm the lone stranger, the perpetual changer,
With perceptional danger, I'm exceptionally stranger

Up - down - anywhere bound,
bullets bouncing all around
Deafening, rippling, artillery sounds
shells create mounds
And decorate the ground

Talkin' 'bout me, makes 'em feel better
2-faced personality, helps 'em deal better
Aim the gossip gun, new clip of me
misinformation, sprays the streets

I'm the lone stranger, the persistant changer
not resistant to danger, but consistently stranger

Breakdown echoing through the town
Sound of dense gossip drowns
flooding is all around producing frowns
and confusing crowns


I think SourStarDust04's topic should stay though since it was so good.

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your own identity

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Who am I? What do you think when you see me? What comes to mind, as far as my idenity. Am I a prep, goth player a sk8er. Who am I. I this I see be for me in the glass of self reflection really me or how the world percieves me. Who is my inner self. When I am all alone with my inner wealth, what does it say?

someone else feel free do this same topic because it has such good possibilities

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Violent, cheerful, angry, tearful, full of rage, are these the expression you see in my face. Which one is the true me? which one will you pick? Will it be the one that bleeds when you poke with a stick? With so many expressions that in me you see, tell me tell me which one you think is me. I'll give you a hint out of five is just three.



next topic:someone new (friend, lover,pet, family addition etc.)

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Violent, cheerful, angry, tearful, full of rage, are these the expression you see in my face. Which one is the true me? which one will you pick? Will it be the one that bleeds when you poke with a stick? With so many expressions that in me you see, tell me tell me which one you think is me. I'll give you a hint out of five is just three.



Good one... very nice Musikgirl!

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Finding you made me so new
Because through and through
you have prooved that you
Know exactly what to do

To lift me up and keep me there
Soaring high through the air
To the sky with out a care
I know our bond will never tear

new topic: Materialistic People


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new topic: Materialistic People
So what is it
that lies within the pearl
that makes
you want it more
what is it about the brand new car
all the time
where is the meaning in your dreams
do you see what i see
its a materialistic being
i cant find the meaning
a diamond is the girls "best friend"
but you pay
for something that will break your heart someday
take away gifts and glory
whats with the materialistic being
products with no need
the materialistic being

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Is life reality or is it a dream
I am so confused it makes me scream
People living their lives with a thought of tommorow
Relying on time that we often borrow
The idea is to live for the moment and not the past
Delisions of happiness makes you wonder how long this can last.
Memories of the days before and blurry and unclear
Am I awake or dreaming the question of fear
It would nice to think that are dreams are real and reality is not. Maybe thats why I smoke so much pot? :smoking:-
copyright sugamegonila 03

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heartbreak from the past




Sometimes it seems that the same old beings
Are always in our lives ruining things
Faces change like our vocal range
Still somehow they are all the same.

Head down I walk across the street
my eyes are fixed on the hard concrete
Mistakes with lovers I seem to repeat
Where's the one I thought I'd meet?

When I was young I was dumb
Always lookin' for that one
Looking around I found none
And my heart grew very numb.

Shredded heart full of pain
Drowning in a puddle of shame
She didn't love me but I'm to blame
For putting out a once bright flame

Battlescars littered my heart and soul
Until one night after a nice bowl
I found the one who could make me whole
Once again my heart was full!

One bright smile on her beautiful face
Healed all those wounds and erased
Depair as she repaired and replaced
My shattered heart at an urgent pace

She's my girl she knows the ways
That I work and just how I play
I hope her love never ever strays
As I soak up all the Summer rays! :smitten:

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days go by
with the sun
staring me down from its perch in the sky.
rays hitting my skin
to match the warmth I feel from within,
With God and Nature,
from the the sand to every single creature.
This is the place for me; this is the place to be.

Beautiful women dressed to envoke and kill
People out on the surf looking for a rolling thrill
Kids at play
trying to keep their mothers away
insisting that they are ok.
Grained castles to rival thier ancient grandeur
Leaving me wanting for more
This is the place to be; this is the place for me.

Sun set in the east
a bonfire to reveal a boiled feast
music and dancing with the best of company
awakens the hibernating happiness in me
When all is calm
under the cover of a palm
and im in my lovers arms
gazing at the stars
I know thisis the place to be; this is the place for me.


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days go by
with the sun
staring me down from its perch in the sky.
rays hitting my skin
to match the warmth I feel from within,
With God and Nature,
from the the sand to every single creature.
This is the place for me; this is the place to be.

Beautiful women dressed to envoke and kill
People out on the surf looking for a rolling thrill
Kids at play
trying to keep their mothers away
insisting that they are ok.
Grained castles to rival thier ancient grandeur
Leaving me wanting for more
This is the place to be; this is the place for me.

Sun set in the east
a bonfire to reveal a boiled feast
music and dancing with the best of company
awakens the hibernating happiness in me
When all is calm
under the cover of a palm
and im in my lovers arms
gazing at the stars
I know thisis the place to be; this is the place for me.


Next topic: A person worth dying for



Great job Cattivo... I dig! :yes:


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Next topic: A person worth dying for

I'll die for you if you want me to
I'd try for you what I say is true
I'll cry for you wipe your eyes for you
As long as your troubled sighs are through

What makes a person worth dyin' for
If you ask me the mere fact they're born
Is all the convincing I'll ever need
In their place I'd gladly bleed

I'll die for you and I'd die for her
I really don't care if I'm remembered
I'll die for you and I'd die for him
If I knew in happiness you'd swim

next topic: Your Favorite Season of The Year

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Next topic: A person worth dying for

I'll die for you if you want me to
I'd try for you what I say is true
I'll cry for you wipe your eyes for you
As long as your troubled sighs are through

What makes a person worth dyin' for
If you ask me the mere fact they're born
Is all the convincing I'll ever need
In their place I'd gladly bleed

I'll die for you and I'd die for her
I really don't care if I'm remembered
I'll die for you and I'd die for him
If I knew in happiness you'd swim

next topic: Your Favorite Season of The Year
Its that time of year when you feel your best
when all you worries and fears are laid down to rest
Friends and family gather  together for good times
which usually includes dinner, willy wonka and the chocolate factory, and playing a board game where you have to act out stuff like a mime
kids are out of school and adults dont work
Sometimes an uncle can drink to much egg nog and act like a jerk
Snow falls gently on to the ground
Laying undisturbed like there is no one around
Conversating and warming yourself by the fire
Happy as a bird, couldn't get much higher
Classic christmas cartoons on the t.v.
I will take these memories with me
Getting buzzed and welcoming in the new year
taking shots and chugging beers :beer:
Waking up the next day to watch the big game
Hope next year will be the same :)

topic: trick or treating- (happy halloween :))

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topic: trick or treating

Knockin' on the door what will i find?
A trick or a treat waiting for me behind
That big old cobwebbed covered door
Is a trick a joke? Or is a trick a whore?
I don't know cuz my big bro listens to rap
They talk about tricks and this and that
I thought 2Pac was a fellow trick-or-treater
Turns out the guy never left with out his "heater"
My bro say's a heater is a "strap" or a "gun"
I'm like I thought Halloween was all about fun
Then he told me a trick ain't sweet candy
But if you pay one enuff you'll feel just dandy
So here I am in my cool 2pac costume waitin'
Do I want a treat or a trick? Is what I'm contemplatin'!


This topic is a good one... someone else could do it too...

if you want a new topic here you go: Your Favorite VR forum User. ;D

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if you want a new topic here you go: Your Favorite VR forum User. ;D

Many personalities he does have
From James Doglas to a smiley with a hat
He's Creative and he is all fun
I have to say I love him a ton
He has made me smile when I was cryin'
He is the one and only Mr. Mojo Risin :rofl:


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That was very nice of you musikgirl... you are too kind! I wasn't fishin' for a compliment by setting that topic but thank you. :yes: You rock! :headbanger:

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That was very nice of you musikgirl... you are too kind! I wasn't fishin' for a compliment by setting that topic but thank you. :yes: You rock! :headbanger:

I know you weren't silly  ;D

Anybody who knows you knows you are no like that


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if you want a new topic here you go: Your Favorite VR forum User. ;D

Many personalities he does have
From James Doglas to a smiley with a hat
He's Creative and he is all fun
I have to say I love him a ton
He has made me smile when I was cryin'
He is the one and only Mr. Mojo Risin :rofl:


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great job  :yes:

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Next topic: Your Life's Goal




great job  :yes:
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Aww stop



Ok go on then ;D

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Your Life's Goal

My life's goal is to be
True to me, that's truly free
And my heart holds the key
To set you free, if you let me

Be yourself its all you can be
Don't let the real you flee
That includes the dark & ugly
Side of things with real beauty

Do what you want to do
Pick a path that you want to
Don't stare through your rearview
You'll hit the obstacles in front of you

NEW TOPIC: Somewhere Nice To Visit

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Your Life's Goal

My life's goal is to be
True to me, that's truly free
And my heart holds the key
To set you free, if you let me

Be yourself its all you can be
Don't let the real you flee
That includes the dark & ugly
Side of things with real beauty

Do what you want to do
Pick a path that you want to
Don't stare through your rearview
You'll hit the obstacles in front of you

NEW TOPIC: Somewhere Nice To Visit
good job

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NEW TOPIC: Somewhere Nice To Visit

someplace to be someplace to hide
someplace like hell or heaven if you believe so
or maybe just a pictureshow
take a ride onto the moon
a nice time bumpy ride
soon will be smooth
clutch the handle as we blast off to your room
or maybe just a pictureshow
someplace somewhere
maybe over the rainbow

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When I think of my purpose i become scared
I start think that im not really here
to be anyone to anyone, to this world.
just to live life through and welcome the last day
last day of searching last day of watching the world slip
through my fingers as I learn that i have no control
no control over my life, no control over the lifes
of the ones I love. No power to see what is meant
 for me.
I have to ask myself would the world be really different if I was not here. The answer is one of a bad dream. I dont see me ruling a nation. I dont see me making any positive controbution to society. I dont see me in my future. Just those around me.

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