Author Topic: Let's Play "Write That Poem"  (Read 58461 times)

Offline STEPH_LVS_VR

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its my first go... i want to to be able to write songs so im practicing, lol
plz be leanient :P
ok here it goes...

Never to return
Never to bo back
You have bought your ticket on a
One way track

Stumbling down the long wide hallway
People screaming, laughing and getting in your way
This isn’t good you know your going to pay

Your books are heavy and
So is your heart
You loved your childhood at primary school
But now you must part

There’s a desk with your name,
So you sit in its chair
Watching as paper and erasers
Get thrown through the air

Your teacher comes in
You suddenly feel like clay
‘Welcome students, to your first school day!’



too long?? give me feedback :)
lv steph   it was my first go :?

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maybe do a poem on soemone who is a muse?? i dunno

Offline ShedPayne

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so whats the next topic? how bout hot girls? okay ill start!! :D

hot sussie walking down the alley
swayin in a bed mood scenery
i aint you're kind of bad boy
but ill invade you just like TROY

eyes are laid on you, hot tramp
curves that makes the boys ramp
boots that drive us all kinky
made our hands a bit greasy

-its stupid :shock:

next topic:Ghosts

Offline STEPH_LVS_VR

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for ghosts i wrote a little poem.. but im not sure if i should post it cause its kinda wierd lol :?  :P

Offline 01Becky

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Ok well I've wrote one for ghosts but it's kinda sad but I'm posting it anyway....soz it's a bit long :D hope you like it!

Ghosts

A few months back on a cold winter night,
Suddenly awoken by a sombre moan,
Squinting in the darkness I saw a faint light,
And realised I was not alone.
I was always adamant ghost stories were lies,
It’s just a continuation of a fitful nightmare,
A pinch, a blink and a rub of the eyes,
But no, the ghostly figure’s still there.

Clearer now as my eyes adjust to the eerie darkness,
She’s a young girl around eleven years,
Hands clasped around a teddy she looks so helpless,
And her eyes are full of tears.
Slowly I sit up, but too scared to speak,
And I watch her as she cradles her bear,
Then she raises her head and our eyes meet,
But there’s no emotion, just a vacant stare.

Voice trembling I choke and stutter on my sentence,
“What do you want?” I manage to say,
She tilts her head and replies “Do you know my parents?”
I shake my head and she turns away.
“I’ll keep looking until I find them, I have to you see”
“I need to say sorry for being bad”
“They told me to keep my seatbelt buckled around me”
“But I didn’t listen and now I’ve made them sad”

With a lump in my throat I sit quiet and listen,
The fear is no longer there,
She tells me of how she now lives in heaven,
But it’s simply too much to bare.
She tells me of how she can do as she pleases,
But what fun is it when your on your own,
All she wants is her cuddles and kisses,
And to feel like she’s no longer alone.

Tears falling I reach out to take her hand in mine,
As I try to comfort the lost spirit,
But my hand passes through her with an ice chill down my spine,
Surprised I quickly withdrew it.
Saddened now she drifts slowly towards the doorway,
Her bright figure weakening quickly,
“I’m sure I’ll find my mummy and daddy some day”
And with those words her silhouette fades completely.


By Rebecca Radley

Offline STEPH_LVS_VR

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^ that was realy realy good!  :D

Offline 01Becky

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Quote from: STEPH_LVS_VR
^ that was realy realy good!  :D


Cheers! :D Glad you posted actually cause i've just realised I forgot to put the next topic *slaps head*

Ok next peom topic is: The sea!


....let me know if that topic has already been done :roll:

Offline Cattivo

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Its ok if it has already been done. Chances are if it has someone else is more likely to post creating something entirely different giving us all something new to enjoy.

on a side note. im proud to see that this game is still going...

Topic: The Sea

Offline SlashsSweetchild

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Okay, this is not true. it just came off the top off my head:


As I lay my brothers ashes out to sea
A tear streams down my face
he'll be apart of my memories
and my saving grace

It's been two long winters since i've seen him last
the last night we spent together we stayed up shooting baskets
Times we shared flooded my mind of the past
As I gazed upon him at his own wake nestled in a casket

He fought for his country and died
He was I a brave soldier fighting in iraq
Last night I stayed up and cried
Because now i'll never have him back

All those years we shared together will always be in my heart and mind
and he'll always be apart of me
He in myself i will always find
As I lay my brothers ashes out to sea

 :cry:  :cry:

By: Tabatha


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next topic: yur VRsperience
(dont know if that was done b4)

should be quite fun and interesting to read :wink:

Offline Future Rock Star

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Quote from: 01Becky
Quote from: STEPH_LVS_VR
^ that was realy realy good!  :D


Ok next peom topic is: The sea!



sorry! i know a different subject was posted but i'm really proud of this one and i really wanted to post it!


Lie Back, The Sea Will Hold You
(Inspired by "First Lesson" by Philip Booth)


There are times when hope is gone
With the struggles we come upon
But time passes and we move one
Even if these times seem long

Yeah, don’t give up
Don’t give in
To the sin
Of not trying hard enough

I know that these times are scary
And we all have burdens to carry
But don’t you ever start despairing
There are still people who are caring

Yeah, don’t give up
Don’t give in
You have strength within
Yourself, and you can find it

There’s always a time when you know
That you’re gonna have to let go
And if you think you won’t make it through
Lie back and the sea will hold you

Lie back, just lie back
Just lie back, the sea will hold you

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okay, back to the current topic, VR experiences. :)

Offline Snake Child

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arrrgh i suck at writing poems but i will hav a shot ,plz dont be harsh!!
im gunna write about  JUNE 9TH

When the lights go down

ahh i cant do it :oops:

Offline Future Rock Star

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arrrgh i suck at writing poems but i will hav a shot ,plz dont be harsh!!
im gunna write about  JUNE 9TH

When the lights go down

ahh i cant do it :oops:


aw. it's okay! at least you have a VR experience to write about... i don't ! :cry:

Offline Snake Child

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you never seen them in concert? :?  :(

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you never seen them in concert? :?  :(


i was going to but then i failed mi examin de espanol y mi padres wouldn't let me. :cry:

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you never seen them in concert? :?  :(


i was going to but then i failed mi examin de espanol y mi padres wouldn't let me. :cry:


 nooooooooo :(

okay magic~

You have magic in your finger tips,
Magic in your eye.
Magic in the arms that hold
And tell me not to cry.
There is magic in your voice
When you talk to me each day.
There is magic in your smile
And in the things you say.
there is magic in the way
You let me be myself with you.
There is magic that you teach me
To be good and brave and true.
I am growing older
And soon I'll go away,
But the magic that you taught me
Will go with me every day.

not wrote to anyone  btw ,just a poem ..i like it :D

next topic~here i guess ,cant think of any thing else.. so the next topic is this place :D

Offline Future Rock Star

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next topic~here i guess ,cant think of any thing else.. so the next topic is this place :D


wut do you mean? like the forum???

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Offline VampyricRocker

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here's a suggestion: what's your poison? as in your obessions and passions. like writing for example.

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my passion
taken up so much reaction
my desire
fueling on my passion's fire
my constant
i don't need consent
i've taken up my passion
of a fashion
that has passed
but has yet to disappear

Offline ContrabandBabe

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since no one gave me a topic.
Lonliness.

Stripped away at birth
from my blood.
Taken away from my mother
when a marriage turns cold.
Lost my father to insanity
way before my birth.
Nearly lost my step father
when depression became to much for him.
Lost my best friend.
To reinvent myself.
Losing someone I could love at a tender age.
It makes me die a little more inside.


Next topic is for a parent: The love you felt when your son was born.

Offline ShedPayne

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Mom, you were with me
Dad, you made me what i want to be
You've been with me to all i've been through
Now this poem is my way of saying "Thank you"
You taught me being free, wildly young naivete
in the process you made me feel free
but though you are now gone
you still make me feel young
and Mom, Dad you will always be in my heart
You made my life such a wonderful work of art..

*it just makes me sad that it reminds me so much of my grandparents..  :cry:  :cry:  :cry:  :cry:  :cry: *

next topic:Prejudice over the poor

Offline Hannibal-the-Barbarian

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What we do at the lovely day,
Feeling free to do it my own way.
The sun is shining I find full bins,
This is one of my favourite sins.

This is what's makes it so damn good living in the rich naberhood.
I am free, while they have to work.
I can live everyfull minute of life,
While I sit at the beach with my doggy,
No worries, I have no wife...

So you see, Life is not so bad as it seems,
Sometimes being rich is much worse,
It's like living in one big factory,
Noone listens or looks after eichother,
Living besides eachother,
Like working individual while being in teams.

No life outside can be very good,
These people respect eichother,
like everyone else should.
Now Coming to the end of it all,
It doesn't matter if you're poor or rich,
We can simply be everyone elses pall...!!!

Next Topic: The end of the world

Offline Negative Creep

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The end of the world is near
Why must it come here?
Why not go to another planet?
It won't be hard to replan it

That's stupid. Haha.

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