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Offline Cattivo

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and here's your host Caaaattttiiiivoooo.... Ok back to reality. This is a little game that started in the original creativity thread by me and my partner in crime Mojo. The key word in that sentence "Game". This is not to be takin' serious although I have seen some really good work come out of it. Here are the few and simple rules
1. I will start out by saying a topic.
2. Anyone can write a poem, story, etc. about that topic.
3. Then that person creates another topic, for the next    person.
4. If anyone else would like to cover a topic already done feel free to. (we are not here to stop the creative processes of anyone)
5. Have fun with it. Try things you wouldnt normally try. Be orginal Be Creative.

The Topic: The prepartion for a big event :D

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nervously i curl my hair and get ready for the dance
wondering will i sit against the wall or dance
slip on my brand new dress and give a look in the mirror
kinda looking like brittney spears....
the door bell rings and there he is standing at the front door.
This is the big night-won't be a virgin anymore

preparation for prom?

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new topic  tying your shoes

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Courageous Summer
Thanks for being the first contestant Scarlet.... ummm cant wait till prom ::)

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Yours was funny Scarlet! ;D

new topic  tying your shoes


Gotta get ready gonna move right on
To the next level step after step gone
Behind me below me forever elevatin'
Lookin' down at you but never descriminatin'

My life has been full of joys and pains
With each of them comes a time of change
And times of growth both inside and out
Gotta keep movin' on up without a doubt

Gettin' ready but don't know what for
Smooth and steady I approach the door
I knock upon it but it doesn't open
Then I hear strong words not spoken

They were in my head like the devil in hell
Contained power like the lead in a shell
Overflowing like the energy of the blues
The words said "Hey idiot, tie your shoes!"


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The day has come...
I can throw the velcrow daibetes shoes in the trash
cause i am down with the over under loop de loop
Ill look so cool
in my old school
high top converses
with the long white laces.
They will stay tight and snug cause i double tied them
so the dont come all lose and I look like a thug
Cause now I can tie dem shoes...

next topic: sun glistening of water

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Yours was funny Scarlet! ;D

new topic  tying your shoes


Gotta get ready gonna move right on
To the next level step after step gone
Behind me below me forever elevatin'
Lookin' down at you but never descriminatin'

My life has been full of joys and pains
With each of them comes a time of change
And times of growth both inside and out
Gotta keep movin' on up without a doubt

Gettin' ready but don't know what for
Smooth and steady I approach the door
I knock upon it but it doesn't open
Then I hear strong words not spoken

They were in my head like the devil in hell
Contained power like the lead in a shell
Overflowing like the energy of the blues
The words said "Hey idiot, tie your shoes!"

ohhh nice one Mojo

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The day has come...
I can throw the velcrow daibetes shoes in the trash
cause i am down with the over under loop de loop
Ill look so cool
in my old school
high top converses
with the long white laces.
They will stay tight and snug cause i double tied them
so the dont come all lose and I look like a thug
Cause now I can tie dem shoes...

next topic: sun glistening of water


Nice topic Cattivo I'll work on one for that!

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The day has come...
I can throw the velcrow daibetes shoes in the trash
cause i am down with the over under loop de loop
Ill look so cool
in my old school
high top converses
with the long white laces.
They will stay tight and snug cause i double tied them
so the dont come all lose and I look like a thug
Cause now I can tie dem shoes...

next topic: sun glistening of water

thats great :) :rofl:

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WOW almost ten posts already...thats what I am talking about :beer:

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WOW almost ten posts already...thats what I am talking about :beer:

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next topic: sun glistening of water

I heard a rumor that Scarlet had one for this topic already.

Here's one for next topic: sun glistening of water


The sun shines as its goin' down
Across the pines across the ground
Skippin' across the pond dancin' in the air
And when I'm gone I'll be right there

Yes the dust may cover my body 1 day
A flame may melt my flesh away
But that's not where I'll be I say
On the surface of that water I'll play

As the glistening water keeps the beat
I dance like I was on a golden street
Right below a clear sky without gray
I'll waste each day with sweet disarray!

next topic: Sinking


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I hear you splashing in the wake
drowning in another's mistake
I wish I could throw you a line
I want to be there to share your pain.
I see your eyes shine from below the surface.
I hear the muffled cries of dispair.
the thousands of molecules floating your hair.
I sink my arm up to my neck
but your out of reach
what more could I expect
no one there to save me
from saving you
No one there to keep me from falling in
No one there to to keep me from sinking in
the deep, dark grip of a another's sin.

Next Topic: Getting off for the weekend :headbanger:

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I hear you splashing in the wake
drowning in another's mistake
I wish I could throw you a line
I want to be there to share your pain.
I see your eyes shine from below the surface.
I hear the muffled cries of dispair.
the thousands of molecules floating your hair.
I sink my arm up to my neck
but your out of reach
what more could I expect
no one there to save me
from saving you
No one there to keep me from falling in
No one there to to keep me from sinking in
the deep, dark grip of a another's sin.

Next Topic: Getting off for the weekend :headbanger:

Wow.....that was amazing! You guys are talented!

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Jumper, panties, toothbrush, hurry
Can't find a thing, haven't got time
All the things on my list, getting blury
Another half hour, i see the sun shine

Bag, where is the god damn thing ?
Here is it, throw the clothes and close
I haven't forgotten a thing
And if i have , tell her, not on purpose

Remember, the car, the keys, the way
Got a CD, got my shades, got my brain
Let's get going, hurry, not another delay
Not 10 mn, not now, missing my train

Traffic lights to red, works on the road
Calling a friend, explaining, making amend
Telling her, sorry, you know why i loathe
Going away, getting off for the weekend.

Next topic : Making love

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Jumper, panties, toothbrush, hurry
Can't find a thing, haven't got time
All the things on my list, getting blury
Another half hour, i see the sun shine

Bag, where is the god damn thing ?
Here is it, throw the clothes and close
I haven't forgotten a thing
And if i have , tell her, not on purpose

Remember, the car, the keys, the way
Got a CD, got my shades, got my brain
Let's get going, hurry, not another delay
Not 10 mn, not now, missing my train

Traffic lights to red, works on the road
Calling a friend, explaining, making amend
Telling her, sorry, you know why i loathe
Going away, getting off for the weekend.

Next topic : Making love

Thanks for joining in Jess...
Good Job I liked that one
Ivy I think this next topic has your name written alllll over it :yes:

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Since no one seems to want to tackle this topic (making love) here's one of mine I wrote not to long ago that I think works. If anyone else wants to post a poem about this subject that's cool too... but I'll set a new topic for others who don't want to post about making love


Falling on my knees as I give myself to you
Don't make me say please you know what to do
In a daze from your touch oh what elation!
Feelin' so full of passion and veneration

All I want is all of you I only need a chance or two
To prove myself through and through
That I'm worth the love of someone true
And deserve the touch of lust from you

Gazing in your eyes as we slowly melt together
Thunderous commotion, sweat like rainy weather
I am submersed in this great puddle of pleasure
I feel this gratitude that can never be measured

Patiently you take your time with each minute
Your spirit blended with mine mixed right in it  
You take me away from a cruel sad world
You are the one I long to call my girl.


new topic: Something that makes you feel brand new

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The suspense of your lovin takes my breath away
you lay me gently on the bed and give me a look like its time to play.
your fingertips softly trace every inch of my skin
I arch my back as you put it in :)
like waves in an ocean our bodies flow with the same rythm and pace
we take our time because we know this is not a race.
Flip me over and hit it from  the back because baby you know I like it like that.
Making love with you feels so right
I cant wait till we can do it again tonite  ;D

copyright sugamegonila

new topic- spilling coffee on yourself

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Nice one Scarlet "Courson"!  :rofl: I really dig that! :-*

Way to pick a good topic for the next one:

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Well, to those of you who are aware of who i am and know something about me will know what i mean by the line "I reveal myself to her,". I know that this isnt typical of the rest of the works here, but my poetry is very different anyway. I just freestyled this in ten minutes, so if its not the best then i guess thats why. anyway, here it its:


I reveal myself to her,
but she still stands beside me,
oh, i feel the warmth of her gift,

On my way to start my day,
The sun looks so bright in sky,
I walk along...
and sing along with the birds,
the warmth of the coffee burns
my hand as i let go,

to the ground it falls,
my mother calls to me,
"Come here my son,
ill fix you up for everyone,
and you will be the most beautiful
boy,"

Next Topic: Walking with your boyfriend/girlfriend along the beach while looking at the sunset.


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Well, to those of you who are aware of who i am and know something about me will know what i mean by the line "I reveal myself to her,". I know that this isnt typical of the rest of the works here, but my poetry is very different anyway. I just freestyled this in ten minutes, so if its not the best then i guess thats why. anyway, here it its:


I reveal myself to her,
but she still stands beside me,
oh, i feel the warmth of her gift,

On my way to start my day,
The sun looks so bright in sky,
I walk along...
and sing along with the birds,
the warmth of the coffee burns
my hand as i let go,

to the ground it falls,
my mother calls to me,
"Come here my son,
ill fix you up for everyone,
and you will be the most beautiful
boy,"

Next Topic: Walking with your boyfriend/girlfriend along the beach while looking at the sunset.



that is great! i always free style my poems that way they come to you fresh and you dont over anaylize it:)- hope to read more from ya  :yes:

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Thanks for posting this Shadow... I think its very good.

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it hink hes poem used the coffee topic already?
like the 2 part of it  :-\

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it hink hes poem used the coffee topic already?
like the 2 part of it  :-\


Okay so the new topic is:

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Hows the warm sand
does it ease the frustrations
how does the sun look
does it shine on you and me
are you tired yet
weve been walking for a long while
but the only thing i can think of tonight
is you and me do you think that to be shallow
id kiss your lips if i thought we'd never be together again
walking along the sand
this shall never end
tonight forever and ever and then

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